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As I said in the "All the Queen's Horses" rewatch reaction post, I've been working on a snippet inspired by 's plot bunny about Fraser watching Thatcher leaving on the train, and the parallels with Victoria. I was wondering if I could impose upon someone for a quick beta. It's about 450 words, and I'd love to have someone take a look at it, point out the rough edges that need a polish, and give an opinion on general workability of style and content (it's sort of stream of consciousness, which either works or it doesn't, and I can never tell with my own writing. . .). Help with a better title also wouldn't go amiss-- I think I stole this one from somewhere, but I can't remember where.

*goes back to canning tomato sauce and editing podfic!*

Date: 2010-09-08 12:14 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] andeincascade
I'd be happy to look at it if you think I could help.

Date: 2010-09-08 03:14 am (UTC)
andeincascade: (Default)
From: [personal profile] andeincascade
Sreamwidth email is fine. I can look at it tonight while I am waiting to put clothes in the dryer.

And I've somehow missed adding you here too. fixed!

Date: 2010-09-08 07:56 am (UTC)
luzula: a Luzula pilosa, or hairy wood-rush (Default)
From: [personal profile] luzula
If you want more betas, I'd be happy to look at it, too. : )

Date: 2010-09-09 12:36 pm (UTC)
luzula: a Luzula pilosa, or hairy wood-rush (Default)
From: [personal profile] luzula
You can send it to luzulae at gmail!

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