Request for beta?

[2corbies]

As I said in the "All the Queen's Horses" rewatch reaction post, I've been working on a snippet inspired by 's plot bunny about Fraser watching Thatcher leaving on the train, and the parallels with Victoria. I was wondering if I could impose upon someone for a quick beta. It's about 450 words, and I'd love to have someone take a look at it, point out the rough edges that need a polish, and give an opinion on general workability of style and content (it's sort of stream of consciousness, which either works or it doesn't, and I can never tell with my own writing. . .). Help with a better title also wouldn't go amiss-- I think I stole this one from somewhere, but I can't remember where.

*goes back to canning tomato sauce and editing podfic!*

Comments

[andeincascade]

I'd be happy to look at it if you think I could help.

[2corbies]

That would be great! Should I send it to your @dreamwidth email? I could arrange a shared googledoc, if you'd prefer. And this reminds me that I've been meaning to flist you here and at lj.

[andeincascade]

Sreamwidth email is fine. I can look at it tonight while I am waiting to put clothes in the dryer.

And I've somehow missed adding you here too. fixed!

[luzula]

If you want more betas, I'd be happy to look at it, too. : )

[2corbies]

That would be fantastic-- the more the merrie!. Shall I send it to your @dw email account?

[luzula]

You can send it to luzulae at gmail!